Direct Mail Piece

[foodbiz]

I need some ideas on How to Design a Direct mail piece to bring people in for a Furniture Store Grand Opening



This is my attempt... what do you guys think

[crystaldragon]

So far, so good.

What you have looks good but unfocused.

What makes their store "special"? The kind of furniture? The variety? Price? You need to find something to get people interested enough to want to see it. At the same time don't give them too much info. If you give people "all the answers" they won't need to come and see.

[foodbiz]