Prom Flyer

[foodbiz]

I am trying to make a flyer for a Limo Company for Prom & Winter Formal. Something Cool and Young...

Any advise guys & gals

[slinky]

Isn't it missing a little prom info for a flyer? Looks more like a banner.

[the_artistic_one]

seems very 'flat' color wise if u step back from it, maybe a little variation would be better?

[foodbiz]

well that is the problem ...I think I am too old to think prom and winter formal

[Xtreeme]

Im 25 so take it as you will. But the left side is what makes it too flat looking. Too bland. Its the grey background. Try a LIGHT blue or maybe green on left once. OR bright like YELLOW so the images on right side stand out more. Shot of kids in lower left kinda upsets the pic balance. Try a couple dressed for prom in upper left pic maybe towards the back of shot more so alot of limo still exposed. Just my thoughts. Instead of call now (sounds demanding) try somthing like "For A+ Limo service look no further then (list co name + #)" Wordy but goo. Cause the call now area is very empty even when you add the phone # in later.

[alexzandra]

I'm agreeing with xtreeme on this one.
Also from a female that is planning on going to prom i see a bit more. Many look to prom to be whimsical almost, a night of memories, yet when i look at your flyer it's a bit to cut and dry, and i don't get a happy or romantic or even fun sense. Those points are important, in my opinion, to a successful flyer. You had a good idea at the top of the flyer, but perhaps maybe think of a thinner font, softening up the back round and making the underlying pics more visible (those pics are good and convincing in themselves) . Also stick to one color scheme..the top is nicely put together in that way , with the softer blues, but the bottom with the harsher blues and grays upsets that piece at the top. Consider the word "elegance" and i think it may help a bit. It seems to be what people look for around prom time. Hope this helps and isn't too late.

[PyroSama]

Also consider cost to print. Use less colours. Keep it to 2-3 max. Light blue white, black, and another shade of light blue.

(white isnt a colour)


Avoid glowing text (at the bottom)


See what you can do with these sugestions and post a new one.


PyroSama

[J-Excel]

The 40' long Hummer looks cool. Looks like a squashed school bus.

[foodbiz]

[alexzandra]

i like the new picture and the smaller text under them..but maybe it's just my brightness but the white is a little bit of a strain to see.