[CRIT]British Army Wallpaper

[Optimus Prime]

I was feeling patriotic, so i spent 10 mins making this

[davidamarkley]

Looks pretty cool!

I'm guessing [CRIT] means we're supposed to critique your work?? If not, just ignore the next part...

The pictures IMO should be either evenly spread on the picture or centered. The picture looks uneven. IOW, it needs more weight on the right side.

I don't know, but it might be kinda neat if you'd put the words horizontally on the middle red line of the flag.

Then put the pictures on the upper and lower portions of the flag.

Just a suggestion that would make it look good, IMO.

Also, you have five pictures that are landscape oriented and one that's portrait oriented. When you first look at the page, your eyes are funneled in to look at that one picture instead of the words. I'm not sure if this was your intention, but it might be drawing away the effect of the picture.

Don't take this crit too hard though, because it does look nice, I just see some things that would make it look even better!

I might make one to show you what I mean... But I'm pretty busy so don't wait up for it!

David

[Optimus Prime]

Cheers for the crits, i'll improve on it! Thanks!

[davidamarkley]

No problem, it's always easier to provide some 'improvement advice' than it is to make it yourself.

BTW, I just noticed that you said you did it in 10 minutes, so cheers for a good job in a little amount of time!!

David

[Optimus Prime]

Here's my second try.

Feel free to add any more crits, those last one's were good crits .

[Optimus Prime]

Oops.

[davidamarkley]

Hey, looking good!!

The only thing I would say is that the pics looked a little too faded. Make them a little more bold and you'll have it!

Keep up the great work...

David