can you comment on this for me?

[butch81385]

can you let me know what you think about this pic? all constructive criticisms greatly appreciated

[vass0922]

The sky looks good, water is nice
The lighthouse needs some detail to it.. still kinda blocky
Also your light from the light house needs to fade into the sky more. Yours still has a defined parabola at the end of it

The moon in the sky is a nice touch
Good work! Keep practicing!

[butch81385]

thanks... the "lighthouses" were something from another pic that had to be included. im trying with the light fading, but can't quite seem to get it right.
besides that, look good for a first time photochopper?

[butch81385]

is this better for the light fading?

[OuTpaTienT]

The lighting on the boat doesn't seem correct. The light from the lighthouse should be extending out nearly to infinity.

I see a reflection of the island but not of the lighthouse or the boat. And the reflection that is there should be more chopped up.

[AzKidd69]

listen to out.. (he is the local god on photochopping)
and kudos to you.. beter than I could ever do ( see avatar if you wanna know what I mean)

[butch81385]

thanks alot out, and thanks to you too azkidd. like i said this is my first true attempt so i am still learning, im sure you could do just as good as that

[butch81385]

which pic do you like better (cant seem to get this one too look quite right)

[UpYourz]

Not bad but are thoses suppose to be lighthouses? It's nice but fix them.

[butch81385]

yea, its for a contest, gotta shop this following image and keep at least one thing from it