a flyer!

[the_artistic_one]

tell me that you think of this flyer thing i have done, it is for an r n b night my boyfriend and i are doing in a local bar in my town, would you go there? crit it and give any nessessary feedback

[JPMiller]

First off ....very nice!
I really like that and it is well done!
only suggestion I would make is that if you give the "ignition" at top a shadow it will pop it out a little from the back-round so as to be easier to read.
The 3rd or lowest graphic is kinda hard to discern, it may be easier in person but I couldn't tell what it was?
the only other thing that could be improved, is the drink specials do not stand out because of how busy it is behind them.
a thicker font? different font? shadow or maybe glow effect?
Just suggestions and they're not even necessary...It is very good as is!

[the_artistic_one]

thankyou kindly. much appreciated!

[Cyclone2]

Whats not too like

Have to agree with JP, and is wallpaper supplies a company name? then it 'should' be capitalized, and how long is Railway St? if its long then give me a street addy

[foodbiz]

Looks great!
With those prices maybe I should fly back to the old home town for a few pints!!!

[Brainchild]

looks good to me.Very nice job

[Fade2Grey]

Originally posted by the_artistic_one
would you go there?

3 smirnoff ice for £5? damn right i would...

i like the flyer, i would perhaps drop a white shadow on the drinks offers text or edit the background a little because some of the text gets lost (black on black)...

maybe the title "Ignition" could stand out a little more... more red, or more red/orange/yellow fire thing going on.

[the_artistic_one]

thanks for all of the crit mi dears i assure you it also looks good on a1 and a4 photograph paper for the promotion of this night

[BettaBuy]

Good job, artistic one !

However, it says 'Sminorff' on your flyer instead of 'Smirnoff'

Hmmm..Leigh is not that far from here...3 for £5 sounds tempting

[the_artistic_one]

now can you tell me what you think of the black and white ones, are they as sucessful, these are just for fly posting and sticking up around town, the hter colour ones worked out well, i just need crit on this one, thankyou all! t_a_o