Need your opinion

[MitaDC]

Ok Headband and I are gonna do like computer sales, repair, and upgrades in our area. We are making a webpage and don't know what logo to use.

#1 Ok this one I did:
http://www.freewebs.com/pjcomputers/LogoMita.jpg


#2 Headband did this one:
http://www.freewebs.com/pjcomputers/pjcomputers.jpg

#3And this is a mix:
http://www.freewebs.com/pjcomputers/mix.jpg

EDIT: Copy and paste the links into your browser

[Cyclone2]

The first one is the best but:
-the text should look clearer
-not sure that I like the image of a keyboard smashing through a monitor [looks like that to me]
-you should have more professional email addy's


2nd and 3rd look unprofessional

[Detritus]

I agree with Cyclone, the email addys need to be something better, and I wouldn't use a hotmail account. I always associtate that with a shady business. I don't like the keyboard image smashing into the computer. 2 and 3 look very childlike. I like Cyclone2's the best of all of em...

sorry

[MitaDC]

np. I am glad we got feedback. I haven't ever made a logo b4. Cyclone u using photoshop? I am but I'm not that good yet so...maybe for right now just leave the emails off? BTW we are both 16. Cyclone do u think I might be able to use yours or play aroudn with your look?

[MitaDC]

Actually that looks like the Gimp to me or whatever that program is on Linux

[Cyclone2]

Thats Photoshop that I used but the Gimp could make the simple design I made and more

Have at mine all you want and keep practiceing

[MitaDC]

How do u do that {starts crying} I can't get mine to look that good...what are you using for font?

[OuTpaTienT]

I hate to be a nitpicker Cyclone (oh let's be honest, I don't hate it ) but I think to be grammatically correct there should be a comma after "Upgrades" and before "and".

[StayingOccupied]

i like the last one by cylone the best. I am in my 3rd year of graphic art/design school and i agree about the other ones, dont use those. The only thing i'd change about cyclones is the color and the font in computers.

[MitaDC]

what? Change font in computers?