Ducks r us

[LilHottStar69]

I have poems for everyone tell me if u like them-

dont steal them piggies! i will beta u up lol

Devils Dance

I'm ugly on the outside
Yet beautiful within
I've overcome a quiet hell
washed clean of every sin

im strong enough to exist alone
to even exist at all
for deep within me a bright light shone
and kept me steady when i felt id fall

ive come a long way to be this strong today
to believe i have a chance
every day i pray to have the strength to say
"No" when the Devil asks me to dance


~Samantha Fabian

mY Little Metaphorically written poem

Unleash the turmoil against a beloved stranger, he who inquires your tears, but inquires with squalid diligence. He, who deatins your suffering because of this inquiry, yet uses the detained to contribute suffering to yourself. So use profound words to beseechfrom this stranger your tranquility once again. Why should he be beloved for the cause of such agony? Only becasue he proves to you, your ability to overcome such anguish.

Faith

Pray for the soldiers risking their lives in this war
The world has become somber,
Cry in their honor
Dedicate your encouragement, and love
Entice peace for the hope this country has
Console the devastated
Have faith and insinuate benevolence,
To keep this world alive

~Sammy

My Romeo
so you made me cry;
No words can explain,
push my soul until I die...
Becasue you don't understand this pain

Don't contribute your sorrow
Make me feel indecent and guilty...
Freinds will initiate us together again, another tomorrow
You see this unwillingly

So you deny,
My heart begins to drain
Let you go,my soul starts to fly
and with buried regrets I say goodbye
~samantha fabian

yea these are some of my poems in my portfolio for school and I just wanna know what u think i write a tremendous amount of junk so if u like um, hate um, just let me know im craving the feedback

[sharder8]

Originally posted by LilHottStar69
Faith

Pray for the soldiers risking their lives in this war
The world has become somber,
Cry in their honor
Dedicate your encouragement, and love
Entice peace for the hope this country has
Console the devastated
Have faith and insinuate benevolence,
To keep this world alive

~Sammy

Sammy --

I'm not big on poetry, but being ex-military, I definitely enjoyed "Faith"!

Keep up the writing, it's a GREAT outlet!

Harder

[LilHottStar69]

Thank you! I really have strong feelings for that poem too, my steo dad is in the military! the hardest time for me was when he went to desert storm

[CMonster]

Great work! I like the first one best especially this stanza:

ive come a long way to be this strong today
to believe i have a chance
every day i pray to have the strength to say
"No" when the Devil asks me to dance

-fantastic


...as long as we're sharing I thought I post one of mine:

Home is the best gift you can give a child!

> courage for life if only I'd known,
> though forever wandering,
> never alone,
> not so long as I could go there,
> not so long as I could go home,
>
> my grandma would be there,
> and my grandpa too,
> and the father and mother I never knew,
>
> mistakenly to take the blame,
> for words I longed that never came,
>
> I love you, we love you,
> you're always welcome here,
> if ever child you falter,
> if ever child you fail,
> come home to us,
>
> words that never came in a place that never was,
>
> Oh that I had that place in memory,
> constant, unchanging,
> my room,
> my bed,
>
> the smell of home,
>
> memories that do not exist,
> of a place that never was.

here is another of mine:

> no god,
> children of constant change,
> nothing to grasp,
> nothing to count on,
> and they don't amount to anything much at all,
>
> cosmic dust,
>
> a single life's meaning defined collectively,
> dullard mind majority,

> themselves but frail bodies,
> temporary memories in an endless ocean of time,
> approving, affirming, loving,
> crushing, dying,
>
> vehement politics,
> the ant hill has a new leader now,
>
> no anchor, no center, adrift,
> no absolutes,
> no god.

[Martoch]

Great stuff you've got there!


I'm currently in the USAF, so I definitely appreciate the "Faith" poem...keep up the good work!



Welcome to TechIMO!!!


Mike

[LilHottStar69]

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> themselves but frail bodies,
> temporary memories in an endless ocean of time,
> approving, affirming, loving,
> crushing, dying,
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I love that part your poems are great!! I love reading other peoples writings if you've got anymore share um!! I'd really love to see them. Writing is my passion

[RedFury]

Sorry, I do the Artsy, not the Fartsy

not that I have anything against poetry, but I've just never been able to get past the "roses are Red" part

[The Real Bingo]

You didnt understand that voilets are blue? Come to think of it, why wouldnt a violet be violet? Makes no sense!

[LilHottStar69]

lol

[jokostel]

roses are red violets are grey... just lemme outta this box for one dang day!...