Needs another part maybe....with different chords and a different melody....maybe between the first and second verse. Usually you dont want to stick to one pattern for too long without mixing things up a bit.
Other than that its pretty cool.
I been so lazy, I just dont want to mess with the hassle of recording lately, lol.
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yeah, there is a slight change, the chorus is G-E-A-C, and the verses are G-E-C-A-C. vert subtle, i know. i never claim to be a musician though, just a guy with a guitar and a computer
thanks JP. you'll get back into it very soon i am thinking