Chip the OREO

Blazer06 · 10-15-2003, 07:50 PM

The introduction to my story for english class:
(note some of the formatting is kinda messed up.....)
last updated 10/17/03

Oreo!

“I think their going to take us.”
“I hope so.” Said Chip to the other Oreo, as he looked from the package. He was an Oreo, not just any ordinary one. He was on a mission. He was double-stuffed. He was to start the revolution. Chip had many viewpoints of how to be taken to the beyond. He was to stop the biting and the dunking. The only way to go was to be twisted. To have the feeling of immortality before he was to become an immortal himself.
He looked at the girl, huge compared to him, but so small compared to the other humans, reaching for the package from the cart. Reaching with all of her might, she grabbed the package.
“For the revolution!” all of the Oreos said simultaneously, as the package seem to fly though the air.
“No no no, dear.” A thunderous voice said, and the package came to a sudden stop.
“Status Report” yelled Chip.
“The larger one has stopped us.” An unknown voice said. A dark quiet fell over all of them as the package hurdled back up and rested on the shelf. They looked out at the girl and mother walk away.
We were so close though Chip. What are we doing wrong? He looked around. “Change Ranks” he yelled. He was smarter than other captains. He knew that he must keep the damaged Oreos out of the humans view. Only then could he be sure that his team would be picked. He remembered the second day as captain of this team. A little boy had taken the package, and when a voice had said, “Put it back”, the package was suddenly hurdled through the air, and landed on the hard surface below. So many had been hurt. Chip had looked up, being in the front ranks, and saw the face, then a hand then darkness, until it was removed and the package was back at the station. That was back before the revolution. That was what had started it. It was back before he was double-stuffed, then finally an Orange-Cream Oreo spy had returned. Tales of the gruesome sacrifices were told. Of the so called milk, and the dunking was vividly described to the great council. The council decided that that was enough, and had ordered a special mission to start the revolution. Chip volunteered, wanting revenge for his damaged friend in the little boy incident. He was elected captain, and a new weapon had been dispatched to him and his crew. It was a secret weapon called double stuffing.

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“Mommy pleeease?” said a voice, waking Chip from his sleep. Could this be it this time? He thought.
“One” Said a female voice.
“Ranks Aware” yelled Chip. “This could be it” Suddenly the Oreos appeared to be alive to the little boy, and he immediately grabbed for the package, not knowing why he did. The package sailed through the air and rested in the cart next to some Ritz Crackers. Chipped looked out and scowled, as he saw the Ritz looking at him. The Crackers looked at him with utter despise. All at once, the package was moved back and he saw nothing except huge metal bars extending up as far as he could look.
It seemed like forever to the team, then the package was lifted, and set down.
“Where are we?” said Chip.
“We seem to be moving, on a black surface. Wait… it’s the checkout counter!” a voice said. With that a enormous cheer erupted from the group”
“Three cheers! For us! For the council! For the revolution!” A booming voice said over the crowds cheers. Suddenly a scream was heard, and panic as many red beams shinned though the package.
“What’s happening?” Chip yelled to his crew.
“Something’s attacking us. It blinding the crew”
“Look away” yelled chip, but it was no use he knew, for the beams we coming though in every direction. He looked around and saw his crew crippling and breaking apart before his eyes. What could this be? He thought, but he knew there was no answer.
Then as fast as they came they were gone, and the package rose and fell into darkness.
“Report” bellowed Chip, afraid that all had been lost.
“All have melted and broken, except for three of us, and you sir”
“Who are you? Name and rank.”
“Ray, First Lieutenant”
“Cream, Private”
“Chewy, Private”
“We will finish the mission, and avenge those who have broke.” Said Chip to them. They were next to him now, and he looked into their cream and saw fear.

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Chip woke as the package rumbled and accelerated out of the darkness into a bright room. He looked around with amazement at the room. He had heard places like this from the Orange-Cream Spy’s. He believed himself to be in the so-called “Kitchen”. He had heard terrible tales of the carnage that went on here. The cutting and militating of foods… being prepared to be eaten. But losing their chance of immortality, because the only way to become an immortal was to enter the blackness, with white and red walls. He though of the in-foodality of it.
He looked around as a hand came down and the package rose. Then it hurdled thought the “Kitchen” and into unknown, they was shaken back and forth viciously as another hand grabbed it, and the package began to break apart, and suddenly a new clearness of the room around the Oreo’s came into view. The package was set down on a hard surface, brown and Chip looked out. This place. What is it? He thought as he saw a creature that he had never seen. It was moving, and it was coming towards them, it was huge. It ran at them, and he began to shiver, looking at it, and said.
“Have you ever seen anything like it?”
A hushed “no” came from Ray, and Chewy. Cream just looked at it, to scared to answer. It came apparently at full speed now, and Chip relized the danger.
“Fall back” He said, as he began to roll back, with Ray and Chewy.
“Cream. Fall Back” he yelled as he moved behind the package. But the creature hypnotized Cream as it rumbled towards him.
“CREAM” he yelled, but it was to late, the creature stopped and dug its claws into Cream, and bite him.
“CREAM” he yelled again, futilely, hoping that maybe something would happen. He looked at the human approaching.
“Super Gerbil. NO” it said, with a thunderous boom.
Super Gerbil? Is this what this creature could be? Chip thought as he was suddenly picked up and forcefully tossed back into the package along with Ray and Chewy. And the package rose leaving Cream there. Chip looked down at Cream, being mutilated by this Super Gerbil. A fiend it was, digging its claws, and tearing Cream apart. He saw Cream give one last effort, as he shot Double Stuffing into the Super Gerbils mouth, and face. But to no prevail he tried. Chip saw Cream be broken and melted in the mouth of this beast before him.
Chip looked at Ray and Chewy, and could tell they were scared, from the moisture on their cream.
“We will avenge him. For him, for us, for the Revolution”
“For the Revolution” They both said, softly. “For the REVOLUTION!” They then yelled with enthusiasm.
The package then came to rest again. On a table, Chip noticed. He looked out as the human removed Ray from the package, and set him on the table.
“Remember what your fighting for” Chip yelled, as Ray readied himself.
The human moved a giant cup of a white substance next to the package. Chip looked at it. Could this be? Is this the dreaded MILK? He thought. He had to tell Ray. Quickly before he found out.
“Ray” he yelled as the human picked Ray up. But Ray could not hear him. Chip and Chewy watched in horror as Ray was dunked into the Milk. They saw Ray fighting for his life, and slowing down, then not moving at all, as he was submersed into the Milk. The human moved Ray around, then removed him. Chip could see that Ray was not broken… but his armor was destroyed. The human bite into Ray effortlessly.

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