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You should either maintain a consistent point of view, suppressing any evidence of a second voice, or indicate when it's a second person doing the speaking, if it's important to get across the fact that you are about to relate a contrasting experience or express a different opinion.
Question: Why did your friend write in the first person, anyway? Is this essential? It's not common in technical writing. I don't mean that you should use the passive voice, just that first-person narrative has a very different flavor.
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